The cemetery.
His eyes were fixated on the spot that she died.
Even though she was gone he could still hear her cry.
With heavy eyes,
He looked back to yesterday.
He was at the same place the days decay.
For weeks his obsession grew some say he was attached to the grave.
Brought there every night like a dog on a chain.
When the wind howled and cut his cheeks
He would swear it was her and grind those teeth.
He was no longer human just obsession hiding under skin and flesh
You could hear it on his breath
"She is here, right here in this grave
her thoughts peirce my mind and take away the day
and if i agree to the way she persuades
I'll be lying here too with nothing else to say"
The days soon passed an he couldn't take it much longer
The sound of her voice kept getting stronger
He united himself to that ground where she was buried
Now forever a part of that cemetery.
What'd the teacher say?
ReplyDeleteChicks dig poetry.
That's pretty creepy; pretty grim.
ReplyDeleteTwo thumbs up.
Curious to the teacher/tutors comments :D
ReplyDeletefucking hat english im behind like 3assignments
ReplyDeleteenglish is the worst... i hate sitting in that classroom, i hate listening to the teacher... i hate everything about english.
ReplyDeleteI love'd english class when I was in high school lol. Good poem though bro
ReplyDeleteawesome job bro , good poem
ReplyDeleteNeat poem.
ReplyDeletepost this type of stuff more!
ReplyDeletenice poem bro
ReplyDeletegood follow up post to yesterday's
ReplyDeleteI like the grim style of it, keep it up man.
ReplyDeleteSad poem but also great!
ReplyDeleteI'm not really into sad stuff but still a great poem :)
ReplyDeleteNot bad, looking forward to seeing more stuff from you, keep it up!
ReplyDeletesounds pretty emo haha good writing either way
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
ReplyDeletelooking forward to reading the next one
depressing :(
ReplyDeleteI like it, what'd your teacher say?
ReplyDeletedeep. very deep.
ReplyDeletegreat poem !!
ReplyDeletefollowing & supporting you
take care
cool poem 8)
ReplyDeletePowerful poem!
ReplyDeletecan u write my essay next
ReplyDeletewow cool would read again
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nice!
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