Sunday, October 3, 2010

engrish

here is a poem i had 2 write for English class enjoy

The cemetery.
His eyes were fixated on the spot that she died.
Even though she was gone he could still hear her cry.
With heavy eyes,
 He looked back to yesterday.
 He was at the same place the days decay.
For weeks his obsession grew some say he was attached to the grave.
Brought there every night like a dog on a chain.
When the wind howled and cut his cheeks
 He would swear it was her and grind those teeth.
He was no longer human just obsession hiding under skin and flesh
You could hear it on his breath
"She is here, right here in this grave
her thoughts peirce my mind and take away the day
and if i agree to the way she persuades
I'll be lying here too with nothing else to say"
The days soon passed an he couldn't take it much longer
The sound of her voice kept getting stronger
He united himself to that ground where she was buried
Now forever a part of that cemetery.

27 comments:

  1. What'd the teacher say?
    Chicks dig poetry.

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  2. That's pretty creepy; pretty grim.
    Two thumbs up.

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  3. Curious to the teacher/tutors comments :D

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  4. fucking hat english im behind like 3assignments

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  5. english is the worst... i hate sitting in that classroom, i hate listening to the teacher... i hate everything about english.

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  6. I love'd english class when I was in high school lol. Good poem though bro

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  7. post this type of stuff more!

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  8. good follow up post to yesterday's

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  9. I like the grim style of it, keep it up man.

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  10. I'm not really into sad stuff but still a great poem :)

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  11. Not bad, looking forward to seeing more stuff from you, keep it up!

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  12. sounds pretty emo haha good writing either way

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  13. Great post!

    looking forward to reading the next one

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  14. I like it, what'd your teacher say?

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  15. great poem !!

    following & supporting you
    take care

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  16. wow cool would read again



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