Thursday, October 7, 2010

story time

here is a story i thought id share with u guys i wrote it in 9th grade enjoy

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                It was moving time.  My family and I were going to move to a new house, but I wanted to stay at the old house at the time I was six years old. “I’m not going” I told my parents over and over again but they didn’t listen.  I pleaded and begged until finally they said they were going to leave without me. I saw them get into the car; I still wasn’t going to go, my Dad started the engine, but I still stood at the door waiting. He then closed the door backed out of the driveway and drove off. I was surprised that they actually left without me. When the car had gone out of sight I closed the door and went back inside. I was all alone nobody was in the house but me. I looked in the refrigerator which was almost empty and grabbed the peanut butter then I grabbed the last slice of bread and began making a sandwich. When my parents came home they saw me throwing a temper tantrum, but it wasn’t because they left me it was because I couldn’t find any jelly to finish making my sandwich.

31 comments:

  1. Haha, are you in college now?

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  2. I saw on your youtube (I know, off topic) that you had a subfocus remix of deadmau5... sickness man!

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  3. dude, you have great writing skills!

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  4. "...because I couldn’t find any jelly to finish making my sandwich."

    You'd be surprised at how many life stories end that way.

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  5. hey bro I changed the name of my blog from too-senseless to pointless-sells.blogspot.com, and my nickname out of Stinsenator to 2Beer1Sip!!! just a littlen note

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  6. haha showed your parents who's boss

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  7. I can't wait to see your next post! Check out Boom Protein Everywhere!

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  8. I just got done with my GTL session this morning, and I was amused by your post

    keep up the solid work!

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  9. no jelly? peanut butter toast! =)

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  10. you should have told them to not have come back without your jelly

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  11. nothing to say except... COOL STORY BRO!

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  12. nice story, your a pretty good writer

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  13. awesome post, bro! waiting for MOAR

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